Wednesday, January 21, 2015


                  बदलाव की हवा



एक पचड़ वेग से
बदलाव की हवा चली
सब उड़ा के ले गयी
एक नयी दिशा मिली

धीमे॓ धीमे सुलग़ रही थी
हर एक के मन मे॑ जोॄ
अाशा निराशा के हिलौरौ पे
उठ गिर रही थी जो
विकास के उस ज्वार को
इक नयी दिशा मिली

भावनाअो का खोखला खेल
दशको से था चल रहा
कोरी बातो॑ से भरा एक नाम था
जौ कब से था सब कौ छल रहा
उड़ गया पृप॑च वो
बदलाव की हवा चली

पर आशाऐ अब है बहुत
क्या उन्है दिशा दे पाओगे॑
गॅव अभिमान इस देश का
है जो कही खो गया
क्या फिर जगा पाओगे

हर हाथ मे काम हो बहे विकास कि ग़गा
या तुम बस कोरी भावनाअो कि नदी बहाओगे

याद रखना जनादेश ये
है चहुँ और विकास का
नही दिया है ठेका तुम्हे
किसी ने घरम जात का
क्या स॑स्कृती के नाम पर
अब तूम आत॑क मचौओगे
क्या युवा के यौवन को
अपनी सोच से डराओग़े

जीत का न जश्न हौ न कोई अभिमान
जन जन का आदेश ये
भरे देश नयी उड़ान
गर विकास का अश्वमेघ तुम घर घर
तक पहूचाओगे तो तूम फिर बस

जितते ही जाओगे

Sunday, October 26, 2014


THE  FIRST TWO POETRIES THAT I HAVE WRITTEN AND RECORDED WAS THINKING OF WRITING POETRY SINCE MY TEEN DAYS BUT HAVE GOTTEN AROUND TO IT NOW HOPE ITS WORTH IT 


चाहत


चाहत एक नशा है
और एश्क एक ज़ूनून
सूनते तो हम भी थै

अाख़ौ क़ी ग़हराई मैं साग़र है
और ग़ैसूऔ क़ी ग़हराई मैं आसमां
सूनते तौ हम भी थै

क़िसी क़ो पा क़र मिलती है मजिंल
क़िसी की बाहौं मैं मिलता है साहिल
सूनते तौ हम भी थै

इश्क़ प्यार ज़ूनून यै
सब हुआ हमक़ो
चाहा उसै तो लग़ा सब मिल ग़या मुझक़ो
पर चाहत मिलती नही क़भी
प्यार होता नही तुम्हरा क़भी
यै भी तो सुनते हम भी थै

हम क़भी साथ चलै थे दो क़दम
क़भी तुम थै मेरे हमदम
या शायद ये मेरा भ़म था
ज़ौ भी था
पर जुदा  हौ क़र भी चाहत
मिटती नही क़भी
यै सुनते तो हम भी थे


क़दमो क़े निशां

समय की रेत पर
ठहरे न मेरे क़दमो क़े निशां
चला तो में भी था

बहा क़े ले ग़यी वक़्त की धारा
न मजिलं रही न रास्ता
पीछे मुड़ क़े देख़ा
तौ क़ोइ न था मेरे साथ
सबक़ौ साथ ले के
चला तो मैं भी था

कहते है लोग ग़िर क़े उठने में जीत है
ज़ीवन में क़ई बार
ग़िर के उठा फिर ग़िर के उठा
तो में भी था

जिदंग़ी क़ो ज़ी भर के ज़ीने की चाह मे
ज़ीवन रस को घट घट पीने की चाह में
अपनी प्यास को अपने में समेटे
अपमान तिरस्कार के घूटं पीते
अपनी नदी की तलाश में
चला तो मैं भी था

तो क्या थक गया हूँ मे अब
शायद
तो क्या डर गया मे अब
शायद
पर एक आग है जो आज भी सुलगती है
एक प्यास है जो आज भी न मिटती है
समय की रेत पर ठहरेगे
मेरे कदमो के निशां
फिर सुनूगां ये कभी

चला तो वो ही था

Saturday, October 22, 2011






















                 TITLE:    VALENTINE

               WRITTEN BY: VISHAL ARORA


A man is found dead at the railway tracks it seems that he fell down from the train and got killed  he was wearing a religious shirt belonged to local organization ram sena the police think that it is straight forward case of accident and close the file


Two months before  


Kalpana lives in Mumbai she is a beautiful and a very talented girl born in Punjab jalandhar

Her father is retd army officer she has been bought up in various boarding schools and is very modern and carefree girl she is struggling to become model and actress in Mumbai she is also a part of the dance group  

She has a boyfriend ajay who is also aspiring model and he is  also part of the same dance group they live together in bandra Mumbai both of them are in love with each other and also very expressive about their feelings for each other

Jay and kapna are perform at at function playing radha Krishna and performing the ras leela they are both good dancers and perform well the audience is completely engrossed and they get a standing ovation aftaer the performance

Jay says to kalpana that tomorrow is Valentines Day and he has gift for her and they will go to the beach tomorrow

Its valentine day and ajay had decided to take kalpana to the Mumbai chowpatty as this was the place that they had first met he has some surprises for kalpana and want to celebrate their togetherness by the beach side

A cultural/religious organization has asked for ban on all valentine day celebrations in the city and had warned couples not to celebrate the same their people are roaming a over the city to prove that they mean business.


Mahesh rungte is local goon he is very young and wants to make it big in politics he has joined the ram sena which has given a call for ban on valentine day and has met its party chief kailsh dalpate

 He wants to prove that he is the most loyal soldier of the party and is roaming from place to place see that the ban is effective


He has been a several restaurants and bars and had asked couples in their to get lost he had roughed several youngsters, shoppers and all of them had obeyed his command

He now moves on to the chowpatty beach and starts harassing the couples who are their and all of them start fleeing the area

He sees kalpana and ajay lost in each other and ajay leans down on his knees and proposes to kalapana mahaesh snatches the ring away from ajay and starts harassing them

ajay very irritated at this harassment starts protesting Mahesh slaps on the face and ajay hits back.

A scuffle break down and all the boys who are their stars hitting and beating ajay they beat him mercilesslesly and then leave him their as kalpana tries to intervene she is also hit.

As all of them leave kalpana tries to get ajay up but ajay lies there life less kalpana cries for help some people who are gathered there rush ajay to the hospital

Doctors examine ajay and declare that he has gone into a coma kalpana is also shell shocked by the turn of events

The police arrive and kalpana tell them about the incident the police instead of calming tell her as to why she and her boyfriend were roaming about at the beach hen there was a warning by a certain organization about the same

Inspector jayadev who is there in the hospital for some other case asks the investigating officer to catch holds d of the criminals instead of harassing the girl

The media also comes to know of the same and the hospital is awash with reporters from every channel trying to get to kalpana

The incident gets reported in the media and makes a big splash

Several days pass and ajay does not recover kalpana sits there in his room staring at him the doctors tell her that this condition of ajay can continue for a very long time and advise her to take him home

Meanwhile in the media there is virtual debate going on people from all factions of the society are debating whether this harassment of people by a certain organization is plain dadagiri or means to gets political mileage

Kailash dalpate is their on every channel defending the actions of his people saying that they are trying to stop youngsters from the bad influences of the west and trying to preserve the cultural heritage of India

The ram sena out rightly denies any involvement of its people with the incident saying that their people don’t indulge in such violence some local elements would have done the same 

Meanwhile the police have rounded up some elements and call kaplpana to identify them kalpana goes to the police station but none of the people who had been caught were from the same group that harassed her

Jayadev meets her there and tells her that the police are under pressure not to touch the people of ram sena as they are the supporting party of the government in power.



Kalpana is completely shattered and comes and sits with ajay days start passing and ajay still does not recover meanwhile kalpana starts neglecting helf and her dressing and everything becomes much laid back she is completely lost in taking care of ajay .

She starts losing her composure she seemed to disturbed and is not able to dance or perform her trope tries to support her but she goes into a shell

Jaydev comes and meets her sometimes and tries to help her but the only question that kalpana keeps asking is when the police would get those criminals behind bars

Jayadev had developed a liking for kalpana not in romantic way but he likes kalpana and likes talking to her he finds way and means to get kalpana out of her shell

He invites her over to his placed to meet his wife and kid kalpana does that and finds the change refreshing she becomes friends with Mahesh wife and kid and she likes Mahesh a lot

Mahesh keeps on meeting kalpana and forms a strong bond with kalpana 


Present time

A man comes to the police and tells them that he had  seen the man who died in the accident with some others harassing a couple in the train they were taunting the girl who was hindu that she was shame as the boy was muslim the girl was crying and the boy was also slapped by them

Finally both the boy and the girl got down at the station the group barring the man also got down he also got down at the station

This opens a fresh angle

Te police open a fresh investigation and jaydev starts probing the same he gets hold of a autorichaw walla who had driven the boy and the girl home

He gets hold of the boy and the girl and after investigating he concludes that they were not involved in the same

But what he comes to know that there was also a girl sitting at last row her face was covered with scarf the man who had given the police information also confirms the same.

The police area tries there best to find who that girl was


Meanwhile another incident  happens a local ram sena worker who had gone ahead and slapped a model and threatened her because she had done some provocative ad campaign and the girl was hit badly the guy got arrested but was soon released on bail and was still threatening the girl

This man was found dead as he fell down from the 18 story apartment the police suspect it is case of murder 

Meanwhile the ram sena had organized a rally for all its party workers its massive rally and heavy security arrangements were made for the same workers from all across India are present there 

Party workers were organize on the basis of the region that they belonged to workers from mumabi were gathered at certain location the police are hard pressed to provide security

Jaydev is also on duty during the rally as he is scanning the crowd he sees kalpana who is standing in the crowd and is watching everyone very intently she is also dressed in the party clothes and wearing a scarf .

Kalpana is looking for Mahesh suddenly she sees Mahesh and she starts to move toward him jayadev rushes towards kaplpana but suddenly she is lost in the crowd

As the rally gets over kalpana follows Mahesh to wherever he goes s and finally comes to know where he lives

We see kalpana going to some dingy markets and she purchases a pistol.

Jayadev meets kaplana and tries to find out where she was when the man in the train got killed and what was she doing in the rally kalpana denies any involvement.

As jayadev leaves kaplana recalls the train incident she saw a group of men harassing a girl and his boyfriend as they kept on harassing her she also grew more and angrier when finally the boy and the girl ran away and the group leader was left in the train

She came near to him and flirted with him the guy responded as he tried to more fresh she told him that she was a muslim and how can he flirt with her the guy told her that its all a politics and it hardly matters as thy were standing near the door the guy tried to kiss her and she pushed him out of the train

She recalls all this in flash back

She recalls how she was filled with dread and fear after the she did this how she roamed from street to street and finally went and sat with ajay

Then she remembers her looking at the newspaper and the man slapping and hitting the model she followed the whole incident and she dos not know why but she got hold of the guy address went to his apartment flirted with him and the finally threw him off the apartment window .

Here jayadev talks to one of his informers and asks him to follow kalpana night and day and report to him.

The informers name is mukesh

He starts following kalapna ,kalapna follows  set routine which revolves round ajay in the hospital her dance classes and then most of the time she sits at the beach just lost in herself .

She also seem to mingling with the crowd of ram sena she is seen participating with the ram sena workers and slowly and slowly she is getting close to Mahesh

Maukesh reports all this to jaydev

Here mukesha who is also alocal goon baeats up one of the shopkeepers on pretty row the man is hit badly and the matter gets reported to the police Mahesh is arrested and jaydev warn him to keep control of himself

Mahesh is released on bail

Jayadev meets kalpana and again tries to probe whether she is involved in these killings as they talk they get into discussion about Mahesh ram sena and all that is being done in the name if morality and kalpana tells jayadev that someone needs to do something about this blatant violation of people live

Jayadev tells kalpana that he will hate to arrest a friend kalapna tell her that that the time will never come


Here ajay dies in the hospital but it does not make kalpana cry she is calm and composed jayadev feels that she is up to something.

Here kalpana has gotten close to Mahesh she asks mahesh out for stroll for a dinner Mahesh is also infatuated with kalpana he has never gone out with such a beautiful woman.

As they meet out and then spend time together its gets late in the night.

Kalpana asks Mahesh to come with her to the beach .

Here one of the workers of ram sena recognizes kalpana as the girl who was with ajay he phones in Mahesh and tells him about the same.

Mahesh comes to realize that kalpana is up to something as they are near the secluded spot on the beach he starts hitting at kalpana he opens her bag and finds the gun.


Here jaydev also turns up at the beach kalpana and Mahesh get into scuffle and Mahesh gets shot jayadev reaches the place and asks kalpana to leave saying that that the man who was  beaten up by Mahesh has died and he will say that when he tried to arrest Mahesh  he resisted and  in the process got shot .

Kalpana who has not cried since ajay death starts crying and the then she just leaves.

The story ends with kalpana spraying ajay ashes and the looking at the poster of the ram sena chief.   



  



Saturday, October 8, 2011


                       





Malwa

Story




This story is set in early 1800 and deals with the opium trade which was prevalent in those times

Jamshedji is the biggest opium trader in Bombay and in India he stared out small but has grown into wealth and stature he is most prominent Indian in Bombay

Rustom is young lad whose father was once the partner and best friend of Jamshedji

Rustom want to enter the opium trade but Jamshedji has stalled his entry everywhere he has not allowed Rustom to get the license of opium trade that is required

Rustom hates Jamshedji and thinks he killed his father who died on trip to china so that he can have the whole business to himself

Jamshedji has daughter Rehan she is beautiful and independent and in love with Rustom

Rustom also loves Rehan but he never told her he first wants to make name for himself in the opium trade and then would go to Jamshedji for his daughter hand

Rustom meets an American William who has come to India in an old ship which he ahs stolen from his father and now wants to enter the opium trade he ahs license for opium but he needs local man

William and Rustom enter into partnership they buy opium and then transport the same in their ship and make good profit.

Rustom In his enjoyment consumes opium and then slowly consumes more




The opium sold in Bombay is Bengal opium which is grown by the British but malwa opium which is grown in central India is of much better variety and cheap so is flooding the markets and British are not getting good price at their auctions

So British go ahead and impose a steep duty on he import and shipping of malwa opium from Bombay

But Rustom who has now become a prominent opium trader and some other young traders they start buying opium directly and shipping it through Daman which is controlled by the Portuguese

And the British Bengal opium has no takers in china and malwa opium has flooded the Chinese market

British are now desperate they bring in strong an Henry who is shrewd and brutal and his brief is to somehow control the Parsi traders who are trading in malwa opium

Henry meets Jamshedji and offers hi m exclusive rights to all opium auctioned in the city if can control malwa traders

Henry also wants to marry Rehan

British prevail in Portuguese and the port of Daman is closed

But ruato m is not deterred he transports the biggest shipment of malwa opium through land route of sindh himself and cheap malwa opium destroys Bengal opium at the auctions in canton the British shipment is sold at half the price

But Rustom on this trip also comes to know of the devastation this opium is having on the Chinese people and is filled with guilt and how this has destroyed an entire generation of Chinese men

And slowly and slowly he is also becoming addicted to opium

He comes back


Now he is prominent so he proposes to Rehan she accepts but tries to dissuade him from the opium trade

The British wants to hit back at the Parsi traders

So they this time to something drastic

They start shooting dogs saying that they are creating a nuisance in Bombay

The parsi revered dogs and the fist ever animal rights riots break out in Bombay

Thousands of people are put behind bars

Finally an agreement is reached and they are released but malwa opium is also now transported only through British ports

Rustom meets Jamshedji and asks for Rehan hand

They have verbal duel and finally Rustom comes to know that his father as killed by British when he after seeing what opium has done to china tried to burn a shipment


Rustom decides to leave the opium trade but not before he takes his father revenge

Rustom burns the godowm that has the biggest store of opium in British history but is not arrested as Jamshedji vouched far him.

Rustom leaves opium trade and opium and marries Rehan.

Friday, September 23, 2011


              
friends find some part of my story mahasamar below hope you like it 



                   Mahasamar philosophy
                   Mahabharata reloaded

This philosophy provides the back story, thematic explanations for the story mahasamar

The whole story characters and situations in the mahabharta are all symbolic

Every character and the way it behaves springs out of the metaphysical theory of cause and effect of omnipotent energy

The mahabharta is not a sacred book the ramayan is

The part of mahbharta that is sacred is the bhagvad gita

When lord Krishna tells arjun that whatever is happening was bound to happen that all the other players in the war were bound to come against each other

That he is the creator and destroyer of the world

That is in spiritual terms but for the sake of the story

The mahabharta is nothing but like a release of energy the clash between the negative and the positive energy of the world the release of unwanted energy the stabilized the world at that point of timer

When we talk of the divine as the source of energy and we are connected to it all the time what we actually mean that makes us what we are

Take it in terms of big power plant if all the energy that is being generated is not transmitted and keeps on gathering at one place there is bound to be an explosion because the concentration of energy is so huge that this energy has to be channeled for it to be of use

And if this power is not distributed then accumulation over a period of could result in the destruction of the source itself that what the big bang theory for the creation of the universe is all about

Th spirit is connected to the divine and the spirit cannot die it is an outlet of energy like a plug which can give energy to any thing be it television or a cell phone o the body is like a receiver and the spirit is the outlet connected to the divine

What mahabaharta symbolizes is that over period of time negative energy vibrations can reach such a level that they can stop people from making the right choices it neutralizes the positive energy like bhishma and dronocharya though being positive could not oppose durodhan

Also when negative energy becomes high it seek a leader like say adolf Hitler or durodhan there has to be epicenter from which energy flows and channelises

If bhishma would have curtailed the ambitions of dhutrasatra the durodhan negative energy would not have become so powerful so as to need a mahabhrata to release it and then at that point of time the divine has to intervene to maintain the equilibrium

At the end of mahabharta residual energy in the form of aswathama was left his source of energy the mani in his head was taken out but he was not killed why not

Because negative energy also need to be present to maintain the equilibrium

But the again over a period of time negative energy gains momentum and threatens to disrupt the positive flow of events

Aswathama is the epicenter of negative energy in this story as he was destined to be resurrected at this point of time because the world needs to be cleansed some negative energy needs to be released as aswathama grows in power and negative energy will concentrate in him and his death would release this energy

Bhisham is resurrected because the of the theory of cause and effect he could have stopped the war of mahabharata by taking the side of dharma he could have stopped the killing of millions of but he chooses to do nothing and now is the time for him to pay for it

So this ia the basics philosophy of the story mahasamar what is happening today was bound to happen

Aswathama was bound to be resurrected because negative vibrations are reaching certain stage and they need an epicenter

Asthama was bound to go for the mani because as he grows powerful negative energy will concentrate in him

Bhisham was bound to be resurrected

Whatever happened in mahabharta was bound to happen because this event had to take place today


Sunday, September 18, 2011

this is my story pink in which i have explored the theme that there is a woman in every man


Pink


Story

Thee is maxim that there is woman inside every man and his is the theme that this story explores

Vikram is  colonel in the army based in Mumbai he is in charge of training recruit for the elite commando training programme he comes from a lineage of three generations who have served in the army and his was considered the “man amongst men” that’s the burden he has tm o carry for himself .

Vikram whiffs at the hint of anything that is feminine he shouts at salesperson who shows him pink shirts but would still love to go to a weepy romantic move but the tries to hide it from the world this how he is

One day he saves a beautiful girl who looks as if she is about to drown but once saved the girl shouts at him saying she was just having some fun and walks away

Vikram meets the same girl at a party she is the daughter of a brigadier and Vikram falls in love he name is netra and then after some courtship their romance blossoms

 Netra looks as if she is delicate but she is not she rides a bullet and is black belt who can fight with 10 guys at time

Netra tells Vikram hat she ha been selected as the  first woman  ever to undergo the elite commando training program and Vikram burst in anger netra cannot understand that

Vikram seemed like an modern man how could he do this s but despite opposition from everyone she decided to ahead with the training

We come to know of Vikram back-story that he used to dance as little boy  wearing woman clothes an eve body used to love it one day his father beta him verb d in front of the whole party when he was dancing dressed as girl and from then on he has been overtly macho

Netra joins the elite command training program she has many difficulties but she overcomes that he can more ribald and crass and can use any kind of foul language used by the boys and even better

Vikram is in charge of training he tries to do everything so that she leaves but she endures everything and come at the top

She gains the respect o her fellow cadets and is their best friend slowly an slowly she emerges as de facto leader of the group

 A fellow cadet amit resents this and tries to run her down

Netra and amit and very few candidates make it till the final round

There is final training and two groups are their one led by amit and one led by netra and amit group s hiding as terrorist and near group has to captures them so it begins but amit group captures netra   and amit beats netra badly as it is real life simulation but somehow near gets away and finally captures amit group n the training is over

But as soon as the training gets over they get a call that there is terrorist situation and they are pressed into service in the leadership of Vikram

 They try to capture the terrorists and amit is overtly aggressive and puts everyone into danger Vikram is injured but netra saves the day and gets everyone out and captures the terrorists
She is awarded the best cadet award

Vikram now wants to get back netra but she is not interested

Vikram does everything but to no avail

Netra best friend is Deepak and he is a chef Vikram feels jealous of Deepak

Vikram meet n old friend who was the embodiment of what a man should bee but sees him changing diapers and cooking food for his wife realizes that there is softer side to every man

Vikram learns cooking and after some day out of jealousy enters into an contest with Deepak and loses

Netra is very angry

Vikram mother tells him that he should let go of whatever hang-ups he has about his father his father seemed tough but was very soft guy

Vikram goes and meets guriji the famous classical dancer and asks him to teach him dance

Guruji agrees but Vikram is able to make not much progress

Guru ji meets Vikram mother and comes to know about Vikram he tells him that let go of the past and the you can embrace the future

Vicar dresses up as a girl and dances with all thumkas and jatkas in front of his mother an servants and enjoys it

Now he is ready

Guriji tells him that he has to perform the dance of the arth narishawar in front of an audience in one month

Vikram takes leave from his office and immerses himself into training

He invites everybody for the show but no one knows that he is performing

Netra and everyone from his work friends arrive on the show

Vikram dances in full classical dance clothes with jewelry and makeup

Some are shocked some are delighted

His mother and netra cry

He gets as standing ovation

He proposes to near she accepts

Happy ending

dear all

 this blog will have my stories and short stories and all the other creatives i write hope you like them